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Documentation/network/index.xml: 1.1 -> 1.2

以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。

Documentation/network/index.xml: 1.1 -> 1.2

月曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。

> revision 1.2
> date: 2005/01/30 23:45:02;  author: heinz;  state: Exp;  lines: +3 -3
> Change wording to avoid double parentheses.

で、この部分の訳については

>       NIS (Network Information Service、以前は Yellow Pages
>       (YP) という名前でした) を使うと

のままにしています。

以下、訳と原文の差分です。

--- Documentation/network/index.xml.orig	2006-02-26 18:42:48.000000000 +0900
+++ Documentation/network/index.xml	2006-02-26 18:42:48.000000000 +0900
@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@
 
 <webpage id="ja-documentation-network">
 <config param="desc" value="NetBSD ネットワーキングの基礎"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.1 2005/01/30 23:34:16 heinz Exp $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.2 2005/01/30 23:45:02 heinz Exp $"/>
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.1 2005/01/30 23:34:16 heinz Exp   -->
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2005/01/30 23:34:16 $"/>
+<!-- NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.2 2005/01/30 23:45:02 heinz Exp   -->
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2005/01/30 23:45:02 $"/>
 
 <head>
 <!-- Copyright (c) 1994-2005
Index: Documentation/network/index.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/htdocs/Documentation/network/index.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- Documentation/network/index.xml	30 Jan 2005 23:34:16 -0000	1.1
+++ Documentation/network/index.xml	30 Jan 2005 23:45:02 -0000	1.2
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 
 <webpage id="documentation-network">
 <config param="desc" value="basic NetBSD networking"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.1 2005/01/30 23:34:16 heinz Exp $"/>
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2005/01/30 23:34:16 $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.2 2005/01/30 23:45:02 heinz Exp $"/>
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2005/01/30 23:45:02 $"/>
 
 <head>
 <!-- Copyright (c) 1994-2005
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@
 
   <listitem>
       NIS (Network Information Service, formerly known as Yellow Pages
-      (YP) enables the /etc/hosts files on the network to be   
+      or YP) enables the /etc/hosts files on the network to be   
       automatically
       synchronised (along with other configuration files like passwd
       and group information).