[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next][Date Index][Thread Index]

pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/build.xml: 1.39 -> 1.40 ほか



以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。

pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/build.xml: 1.39 -> 1.40
> remove extra ")"

pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/debug.xml: 1.5 -> 1.6
pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/fixes.xml: 1.76 -> 1.77
> remove duplicate words.

pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/devfaq.xml: 1.7 -> 1.8
pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/faq.xml: 1.31 -> 1.32
pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/platforms.xml: 1.46 -> 1.48
> fix typo

build.xml, debug.xml, platforms.xml の一部は、原文の変更をそのまま訳に反映しています。
それ以外は、訳は変更していません。
木曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。

以下、訳と原文それぞれの新旧の差分です。

--- build.xml.orig	2007-01-17 08:17:29.000000000 +0900
+++ build.xml	2007-01-17 08:17:29.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: build.xml,v 1.39 2006/12/02 06:03:31 kano Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: build.xml,v 1.40 2006/12/04 12:39:52 kano Exp $ -->
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: build.xml,v 1.39 2006/12/02 06:03:31 kano Exp   -->
+<!-- NetBSD: build.xml,v 1.40 2006/12/04 12:39:52 kano Exp   -->
 
 <chapter id="build">
   <title>構築の手順</title>
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
       <title>ファイルの取得はどのようにおこなわれるか?</title>
 
       <para><emphasis>fetch</emphasis> 相では、distfile
-      がすべてローカルディレクトリー (<varname>DISTDIR</varname>),
+      がすべてローカルディレクトリー (<varname>DISTDIR</varname>,
       pkgsrc 利用者が設定可能) に存在する状態にします。
       distfile は以下の形式のコマンドを使って取得されます。</para>
 
--- debug.xml.orig	2007-01-17 08:17:31.000000000 +0900
+++ debug.xml	2007-01-17 08:17:31.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: debug.xml,v 1.5 2006/09/13 23:25:14 wiz Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: debug.xml,v 1.6 2006/12/03 01:03:38 kano Exp $ -->
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: debug.xml,v 1.5 2006/09/13 23:25:14 wiz Exp   -->
+<!-- NetBSD: debug.xml,v 1.6 2006/12/03 01:03:38 kano Exp   -->
 
 <chapter id="debug">
   <title>デバッグ</title>
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>バイナリーパッケージを再インストールします:</para>
 
-      <screen>&rprompt; <userinput>pkgadd .../<replaceable>examplepkg</replaceable>.tgz</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&rprompt; <userinput>pkg_add .../<replaceable>examplepkg</replaceable>.tgz</userinput></screen>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
--- devfaq.xml.orig	2007-01-17 08:17:32.000000000 +0900
+++ devfaq.xml	2007-01-17 08:17:32.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: devfaq.xml,v 1.7 2006/10/25 14:24:54 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: devfaq.xml,v 1.8 2006/12/02 13:02:14 kano Exp $ -->
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: devfaq.xml,v 1.7 2006/10/25 14:24:54 rillig Exp   -->
+<!-- NetBSD: devfaq.xml,v 1.8 2006/12/02 13:02:14 kano Exp   -->
 
 <chapter id="devfaq"> <?dbhtml filename="devfaq.html"?>
 <title>よくある質問</title>
--- faq.xml.orig	2007-01-17 08:17:34.000000000 +0900
+++ faq.xml	2007-01-17 08:17:34.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.31 2006/10/25 14:24:54 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.32 2006/12/04 14:34:20 kano Exp $ -->
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.31 2006/10/25 14:24:54 rillig Exp   -->
+<!-- NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.32 2006/12/04 14:34:20 kano Exp   -->
 
 <chapter id="faq"> <?dbhtml filename="faq.html"?>
 <title>よくある質問</title>
--- fixes.xml.orig	2007-01-17 08:17:35.000000000 +0900
+++ fixes.xml	2007-01-17 08:17:35.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: fixes.xml,v 1.76 2006/12/01 14:19:06 reed Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: fixes.xml,v 1.77 2006/12/02 13:02:14 kano Exp $ -->
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: fixes.xml,v 1.76 2006/12/01 14:19:06 reed Exp   -->
+<!-- NetBSD: fixes.xml,v 1.77 2006/12/02 13:02:14 kano Exp   -->
 
 <chapter id="fixes"> <?dbhtml filename="fixes.html"?>
 <title>パッケージを動くようにする</title>
--- platforms.xml.orig	2007-01-17 08:17:36.000000000 +0900
+++ platforms.xml	2007-01-17 08:17:36.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.46 2006/11/28 15:47:38 tv Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.48 2006/12/04 14:34:20 kano Exp $ -->
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.46 2006/11/28 15:47:38 tv Exp   -->
+<!-- NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.48 2006/12/04 14:34:20 kano Exp   -->
 
 <chapter id="platforms">
   <title>&os; 以外のシステムで pkgsrc を使う</title>
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@
       を作成するはずです。</para>
 
       <para>gcc と MIPSPro コンパイラーチェインの両方をインストールしているが、
-      必ず MIPRPro を使うようにしたい場合は、<varname>PATH</varname>
+      必ず MIPSPro を使うようにしたい場合は、<varname>PATH</varname>
       に gcc の場所 (ありがちなのは
       <filename>/usr/freeware/bin</filename>) を<emphasis>含めない</emphasis>でください。さらに (重要)、
       '--preserve-path' フラグを bootstrap に渡してください。</para>
Index: build.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/build.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.39
retrieving revision 1.40
diff -u -r1.39 -r1.40
--- build.xml	2 Dec 2006 06:03:31 -0000	1.39
+++ build.xml	4 Dec 2006 12:39:52 -0000	1.40
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: build.xml,v 1.39 2006/12/02 06:03:31 kano Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: build.xml,v 1.40 2006/12/04 12:39:52 kano Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="build">
   <title>The build process</title>
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@
 
       <para>The <emphasis>fetch</emphasis> phase makes sure that
       all the distfiles exist in a local directory
-      (<varname>DISTDIR</varname>), which can be set by the pkgsrc
+      (<varname>DISTDIR</varname>, which can be set by the pkgsrc
       user). If the files do not exist, they are fetched using
       commands of the form</para>
 
Index: debug.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/debug.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- debug.xml	13 Sep 2006 23:25:14 -0000	1.5
+++ debug.xml	3 Dec 2006 01:03:38 -0000	1.6
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: debug.xml,v 1.5 2006/09/13 23:25:14 wiz Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: debug.xml,v 1.6 2006/12/03 01:03:38 kano Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="debug">
   <title>Debugging</title>
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>Reinstall the binary package:</para>
 
-      <screen>&rprompt; <userinput>pkgadd .../<replaceable>examplepkg</replaceable>.tgz</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&rprompt; <userinput>pkg_add .../<replaceable>examplepkg</replaceable>.tgz</userinput></screen>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
Index: devfaq.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/devfaq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- devfaq.xml	25 Oct 2006 14:24:54 -0000	1.7
+++ devfaq.xml	2 Dec 2006 13:02:14 -0000	1.8
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: devfaq.xml,v 1.7 2006/10/25 14:24:54 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: devfaq.xml,v 1.8 2006/12/02 13:02:14 kano Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="devfaq"> <?dbhtml filename="devfaq.html"?>
 <title>Frequently Asked Questions</title>
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
 	<listitem><para>Some parts of pkgsrc are only <quote>implicitly
 	documented</quote>, that is the documentation exists only in the
 	mind of the developer who wrote the code. To get this
-	information, use the the <command>cvs annotate</command> command
+	information, use the <command>cvs annotate</command> command
 	to see who has written it and ask on the
 	<literal>tech-pkg</literal> mailing list, so that others can
 	find your questions later (see above). To be sure that the
Index: faq.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/faq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.31
retrieving revision 1.32
diff -u -r1.31 -r1.32
--- faq.xml	25 Oct 2006 14:24:54 -0000	1.31
+++ faq.xml	4 Dec 2006 14:34:20 -0000	1.32
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.31 2006/10/25 14:24:54 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.32 2006/12/04 14:34:20 kano Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="faq"> <?dbhtml filename="faq.html"?>
 <title>Frequently Asked Questions</title>
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
 <command>bootstrap</command> script will ease non-root configuration when
 given the <quote>--ignore-user-check</quote> flag, as it will choose and
 use multiple default directories under <filename>~/pkg</filename> as the
-installation targets.  These directories can be overriden by the
+installation targets.  These directories can be overridden by the
 <quote>--prefix</quote> flag provided by the script, as well as some others
 that allow finer tuning of the tree layout.</para>
 
Index: fixes.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/fixes.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.76
retrieving revision 1.77
diff -u -r1.76 -r1.77
--- fixes.xml	1 Dec 2006 14:19:06 -0000	1.76
+++ fixes.xml	2 Dec 2006 13:02:14 -0000	1.77
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: fixes.xml,v 1.76 2006/12/01 14:19:06 reed Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: fixes.xml,v 1.77 2006/12/02 13:02:14 kano Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="fixes"> <?dbhtml filename="fixes.html"?>
 <title>Making your package work</title>
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@
 
 	<para>Binaries may not be placed on an FTP server.  Set
 	this variable to <varname>${RESTRICTED}</varname>
-	whenever a binary package may not not be made available
+	whenever a binary package may not be made available
 	on the Internet.</para>
       </listitem>
 
Index: platforms.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/platforms.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.46
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -r1.46 -r1.48
--- platforms.xml	28 Nov 2006 15:47:38 -0000	1.46
+++ platforms.xml	4 Dec 2006 14:34:20 -0000	1.48
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.46 2006/11/28 15:47:38 tv Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.48 2006/12/04 14:34:20 kano Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="platforms">
   <title>Using pkgsrc on systems other than &os;</title>
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@
       default.</para>
 
       <para>If you have both the MIPSPro compiler chain installed as well as gcc,
-      but want to make sure that MIPRPro is used, please set your <varname>PATH</varname>
+      but want to make sure that MIPSPro is used, please set your <varname>PATH</varname>
       to <emphasis>not</emphasis> include the location of gcc (often
       <filename>/usr/freeware/bin</filename>), and (important) pass the
       '--preserve-path' flag.</para>
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@
 
       </sect3>
       <sect3 id="solaris-sunpro-64">
-	<title>Buildling 64-bit binaries with SunPro</title>
+	<title>Building 64-bit binaries with SunPro</title>
 
 	<para>Building 64-bit binaries is a little trickier. First, you
 	need to bootstrap pkgsrc in 64-bit mode. One problem here is