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Ports/macppc/faq.xml: 1.6 -> 1.10
以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。
Ports/macppc/faq.xml: 1.6 -> 1.10
> revision 1.10
> date: 2007/01/03 06:53:53; author: kano; state: Exp; lines: +8 -10
> - restore broken <screen>s
> - add missing space
> ----------------------------
> revision 1.9
> date: 2007/01/01 13:01:06; author: kano; state: Exp; lines: +4 -4
> - remove extra character
> - add missing character
> ----------------------------
> revision 1.8
> date: 2007/01/01 10:55:23; author: kano; state: Exp; lines: +3 -3
> remove extra character
> ----------------------------
> revision 1.7
> date: 2006/09/18 14:29:36; author: kano; state: Exp; lines: +3 -3
> remove duplicate words
金曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。
以下、訳と原文それぞれの新旧の差分です。
--- Ports/macppc/faq.xml.orig 2007-01-18 00:51:00.000000000 +0900
+++ Ports/macppc/faq.xml 2007-01-18 00:51:00.000000000 +0900
@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
<webpage id="ja-Ports-macppc-faq">
<config param="desc" value="NetBSD/macppc よくある質問"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.6 2006/03/30 23:55:26 jschauma Exp $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.10 2007/01/03 06:53:53 kano Exp $"/>
<!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.6 2006/03/30 23:55:26 jschauma Exp -->
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2006/03/30 23:55:26 $"/>
+<!-- NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.10 2007/01/03 06:53:53 kano Exp -->
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2007/01/03 06:53:53 $"/>
<head>
<!-- Copyright (c) 1998-2005
The NetBSD Foundation, Inc. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. -->
@@ -122,11 +122,11 @@
</para>
<screen>Open Firmware, 1.0.5
-To continue booting the Mac OS type:
+To continue booting the MacOS type:
BYE<return>
To continue booting from the default boot device type:
BOOT<return>
-ok
+ ok
<prompt>0 > </prompt></screen>
<para>もしこのようなメッセージが画面 (またはシリアルコンソール) に出ていなければ、
@@ -1781,8 +1781,7 @@
<literal>load-base</literal>
を適切に設定するために次のコマンドを実行します:</para>
-<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv load-base
-600000</userinput>
+<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv load-base 600000</userinput>
<prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>reset-all</userinput></screen>
<para>正しく設定されたか、 <literal>printenv</literal>
@@ -1818,9 +1817,8 @@
─ System Disk を使うたびに、 <literal>real-base</literal>
を設定しなおす必要があります):</para>
-<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv real-base
-F00000</userinput> <prompt>0 >
-</prompt><userinput>reset-all</userinput></screen>
+<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv real-base F00000</userinput>
+<prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>reset-all</userinput></screen>
<para>正しく設定されたか、 <literal>printenv</literal> コマンドで再確認すべきです。
誤った値を設定した場合、マシンが起動しなくなることがあります
@@ -1846,7 +1844,7 @@
<para>これを決めたら、これらの値の設定と保存を行う必要があります。
Open Firmware を使い始める上での手引については、
<xref linkend="ofw-access" />と
-<xref linkend="ofw-use" />) を見てください。
+<xref linkend="ofw-use" /> を見てください。
手短に言えば、以下の 3 コマンドを実行する必要があります (ここで
<emphasis>in-device</emphasis> と <emphasis>out-device</emphasis>
は、この FAQ 項目をもとに決めた値です):</para>
@@ -2152,7 +2150,7 @@
</orderedlist>
<note>
- <title>Adaptec 2940 シリーズの SCSI カードに関する注意</title>。
+ <title>Adaptec 2940 シリーズの SCSI カードに関する注意</title>
<para>このシリーズの
SCSI カードのファームウェアには三つのバージョンがあります。このカードを
@@ -2379,7 +2377,7 @@
<para>オンボードビデオとキーボードを使ってはブートできない
<ulink url="models.html#no.ofw.fb">機種</ulink>もあります。
シリアルコンソール (<xref
-linkend="ofw-input-output-devices-ofwpre3-serial" />参照を使ってみてください。</para>
+linkend="ofw-input-output-devices-ofwpre3-serial" />参照) を使ってみてください。</para>
</sect3>
Index: Ports/macppc/faq.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/htdocs/Ports/macppc/faq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.10
--- Ports/macppc/faq.xml 30 Mar 2006 23:55:26 -0000 1.6
+++ Ports/macppc/faq.xml 3 Jan 2007 06:53:53 -0000 1.10
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
<webpage id="Ports-macppc-faq">
<config param="desc" value="NetBSD/macppc Frequently Asked Questions"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.6 2006/03/30 23:55:26 jschauma Exp $"/>
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2006/03/30 23:55:26 $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.10 2007/01/03 06:53:53 kano Exp $"/>
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2007/01/03 06:53:53 $"/>
<head>
<!-- Copyright (c) 1998-2005
The NetBSD Foundation, Inc. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. -->
@@ -120,11 +120,11 @@
encountering.</para>
<screen>Open Firmware, 1.0.5
-To continue booting the Mac OS type:
+To continue booting the MacOS type:
BYE<return>
To continue booting from the default boot device type:
BOOT<return>
-ok
+ ok
<prompt>0 > </prompt></screen>
<para>If you don't see this message on screen (or serial console), then you
@@ -1366,7 +1366,7 @@
<row>
<entry><literal>dir <emphasis>device</emphasis></literal></entry>
- <entry>print a listing of the files listing of the files on a
+ <entry>print a listing of the files on a
particular <emphasis>device</emphasis> (the same as
<literal>ls</literal> in unix); see <xref linkend="ofw-dir-listing"
/></entry>
@@ -1780,8 +1780,7 @@
following commands to set your <literal>load-base</literal>
properly:</para>
-<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv load-base
-600000</userinput>
+<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv load-base 600000</userinput>
<prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>reset-all</userinput></screen>
<para>You should double-check that this value has been set using the
@@ -1817,9 +1816,8 @@
properly — you will need to re-set your <literal>real-base</literal>
after each use of System Disk):</para>
-<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv real-base
-F00000</userinput> <prompt>0 >
-</prompt><userinput>reset-all</userinput></screen>
+<screen><prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>setenv real-base F00000</userinput>
+<prompt>0 > </prompt><userinput>reset-all</userinput></screen>
<para>You should double-check that this value has been set using the
<literal>printenv</literal> command. If you set wrong value here, it might
@@ -1844,7 +1842,7 @@
Firmware you are using and the hardware you are using.</para>
<para>Once you figure this out, you will need to set these values and store
-them. See <xref linkend="ofw-access" /> and <xref linkend="ofw-use" />)
+them. See <xref linkend="ofw-access" /> and <xref linkend="ofw-use" />
for help getting started in Open Firmware. Briefly, you'll want to run the
following three commands (where <emphasis>in-device</emphasis> and
<emphasis>out-device</emphasis> are what you chose to use):</para>
@@ -2156,7 +2154,7 @@
</orderedlist>
<note>
- <title>Note about the Adaptec 2940 series of SCSI cards</title>.
+ <title>Note about the Adaptec 2940 series of SCSI cards</title>
<para>There are three versions of the Firmware for this series of SCSI
cards. If you are using this card on a PowerMacintosh 7300 thru 9600,
@@ -2308,7 +2306,7 @@
(<xref linkend="formatstate-not-valid" />), <literal>bad partition
number</literal> (<xref linkend="bad-partition" />), hard drive doesn't
spin up quickly enough (<xref linkend="drive-spinup" />)
-and<literal>real-base</literal> (<xref linkend="ofw-real-base" />).</para>
+and <literal>real-base</literal> (<xref linkend="ofw-real-base" />).</para>
</sect3>
@@ -2382,7 +2380,7 @@
<para>There are several <ulink url="models.html#no.ofw.fb">models</ulink>
that cannot be booted while using the on-board video and keyboard. Try
using a serial console (see <xref
-linkend="ofw-input-output-devices-ofwpre3-serial" />.</para>
+linkend="ofw-input-output-devices-ofwpre3-serial" />).</para>
</sect3>