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以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。

Documentation/network/netboot/files.html: 1.29 -> 1.37

月曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。

原文の変更のうち、
フィードバック用のフォームのアドレス変更と、
> -   replacing <tt>255.255.255.0</tt> with the broadcast address your 
> +   replacing <tt>255.255.255.0</tt> with the netmask your 
この変更は、
すでに反映ずみのため、訳の差分には出ていません。

以下、訳と原文の差分です。

--- files.html.orig	Sat Dec  3 22:01:53 2005
+++ files.html	Sat Dec  3 22:08:10 2005
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
-<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN">
+<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN">
 
 <html lang="ja">
 <head>
-<!-- Copyright (c) 1998-2003
-        The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.  ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. -->
+<!-- Copyright (c) 1998-2004
+	The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.  ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. -->
 <link rev="made" href="mailto:www@jp.NetBSD.org">
 <title>Diskless NetBSD HOW-TO ファイルシステムの設定</title>
 </head>
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@
 <p>
 
 <li>必須の配布物を展開します:<br>
-<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-1.5.3/binary/sets/base.tgz</b></tt><br>
-<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-1.5.3/binary/sets/etc.tgz</b></tt><br>
+<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-release/binary/sets/base.tgz</b></tt><br>
+<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-release/binary/sets/etc.tgz</b></tt><br>
 <p>
 
 <li>他の配布物も、同様にして展開します。
@@ -62,7 +62,8 @@
    <tt># <b>mkfile 16m /export/client/swap</b></tt>
 <p>
 
-<li><tt>/etc/ifconfig.le0</tt>の設定。下記の行を内容に持つ、
+<li><tt>/etc/ifconfig.le0</tt>の設定 (ファイル名の <tt>le0</tt> は、
+クライアントのイーサネットカードの NetBSD でのデバイス名)。下記の行を内容に持つ、
    <tt>/export/client/root/etc/ifconfig.le0</tt> というファイルを作ります:
 <pre><b>inet client netmask 255.255.255.0 broadcast 192.168.1.255</b></pre>
    ここで <tt>255.255.255.0</tt> はネットワーク管理者が指定するサブネットマスク、
@@ -146,7 +147,8 @@
 <p>
 
 <li><tt>/dev</tt> ファイルの作成。<br>
-   <tt># <b>cd /dev;./MAKEDEV all</b></tt><br>
+   <tt># <b>cd /dev<br>
+       # /bin/sh MAKEDEV all</b></tt><br>
    これにはしばらく (少なくとも 2 分) かかりますので、気長に待ってください。
    <p>
    注意: HP-UX 9 以前の NFS サーバーは、クライアントがデバイスファイルを
@@ -197,8 +199,8 @@
 <table width="100%"><tr><td>
   <table><tr><td>
     <a href="../../../"><img
-        src="../../../../images/NetBSD-flag.gif" border="0"
-        width="91" height="42" alt=""></a> 
+        src="../../../../images/NetBSD-flag.png" border="0"
+        width="90" height="90" alt=""></a> 
   </td><td>
     <a href="../../../"><img
         src="../../../../images/empty.gif" border="0"
@@ -207,8 +209,8 @@
 </td><td>
   <table><tr><td> 
     <a href="../../../Documentation/"><img
-        src="../../../../images/NetBSD-flag.gif" border="0"
-        width="91" height="42" alt=""></a>
+        src="../../../../images/NetBSD-flag.png" border="0"
+        width="90" height="90" alt=""></a>
   </td><td>
     <a href="../../../Documentation/"><img
         src="../../../../images/empty.gif" border="0"
@@ -222,10 +224,10 @@
   (連絡先 - <a href="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/feedback.cgi">英語</a>,
        <a href="mailto:www@jp.NetBSD.org">日本語:
        www@jp.NetBSD.org</a>)<br>
-  $NetBSD: files.html,v 1.29 2002/08/09 16:37:33 jschauma Exp $<br>
+  $NetBSD: files.html,v 1.37 2004/10/30 22:33:31 jschauma Exp $<br>
   <!-- based on english translation: -->
-  <!-- NetBSD: files.html,v 1.29 2002/08/09 16:37:33 jschauma Exp   -->
-  <a href="../../../Misc/disclaimer.html">Copyright &copy; 1998-2003
+  <!-- NetBSD: files.html,v 1.37 2004/10/30 22:33:31 jschauma Exp   -->
+  <a href="../../../Misc/disclaimer.html">Copyright &copy; 1998-2004
     The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.  ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.</a>
   </small>
 </address>
Index: Documentation/network/netboot/files.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/htdocs/Documentation/network/netboot/files.html,v
retrieving revision 1.29
retrieving revision 1.37
diff -u -r1.29 -r1.37
--- Documentation/network/netboot/files.html	9 Aug 2002 16:37:33 -0000	1.29
+++ Documentation/network/netboot/files.html	30 Oct 2004 22:33:31 -0000	1.37
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN">
+<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN">
 
 <html>
 <head>
-<!-- Copyright (c) 1998, 1999, 2000
+<!-- Copyright (c) 1998-2004
 	The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.  ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. -->
-<link rev="made" href="mailto:www@NetBSD.ORG">
+<link rev="made" href="mailto:www@NetBSD.org">
 <title>Setting up the filesystem, Diskless NetBSD HOW-TO</title>
 </head>
 <body bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000">
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@
 <p>
 
 <li>Extract essential distribution sets:<br>
-<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-1.5.3/binary/sets/base.tgz</b></tt><br>
-<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-1.5.3/binary/sets/etc.tgz</b></tt><br>
+<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-release/binary/sets/base.tgz</b></tt><br>
+<tt>#&nbsp;<b>tar&nbsp;[--numeric-owner]&nbsp;-xvpzf&nbsp;/export/client/NetBSD-release/binary/sets/etc.tgz</b></tt><br>
 <p>
 
 <li>Extract any additional distribution sets using the same procedure
@@ -61,11 +61,12 @@
    <tt># <b>mkfile 16m /export/client/swap</b></tt>
 <p>
 
-<li>Set up <tt>/etc/ifconfig.le0</tt>.  Create a file called 
+<li>Set up <tt>/etc/ifconfig.le0</tt>, where <tt>le0</tt> is the NetBSD 
+device name for your ethernet card.  Create a file called 
    <tt>/export/client/root/etc/ifconfig.le0</tt>, which has the following
    line:
 <pre><b>inet client netmask 255.255.255.0 broadcast 192.168.1.255</b></pre>
-   replacing <tt>255.255.255.0</tt> with the broadcast address your 
+   replacing <tt>255.255.255.0</tt> with the netmask your 
    network administrator wants you to use, and replacing <tt>192.168.1.255</tt>
    with the broadcast address your network administrator specifies.
 <p>
@@ -143,7 +144,8 @@
 <p>
 
 <li>Create the <tt>/dev</tt> files.<br>
-   <tt># <b>cd /dev;./MAKEDEV all</b></tt><br>
+   <tt># <b>cd /dev<br>
+       # /bin/sh MAKEDEV all</b></tt><br>
    This takes a while (at least two minutes), be patient.
    <p>
    Note, this won't work using the HP-UX 9 or earlier NFS server,
@@ -192,8 +194,8 @@
 <table width="100%"><tr><td>
   <table><tr><td>
     <a href="../../../"><img
-        src="../../../images/NetBSD-flag.gif" border="0"
-        width="91" height="42" alt=""></a> 
+        src="../../../images/NetBSD-flag.png" border="0"
+        width="90" height="90" alt=""></a> 
   </td><td>
     <a href="../../../"><img
         src="../../../images/empty.gif" border="0"
@@ -202,8 +204,8 @@
 </td><td>
   <table><tr><td> 
     <a href="../../../Documentation/"><img
-        src="../../../images/NetBSD-flag.gif" border="0"
-        width="91" height="42" alt=""></a>
+        src="../../../images/NetBSD-flag.png" border="0"
+        width="90" height="90" alt=""></a>
   </td><td>
     <a href="../../../Documentation/"><img
         src="../../../images/empty.gif" border="0"
@@ -214,10 +216,9 @@
 <hr>
 <address>
   <small>
-  <a href="../../../Misc/feedback.html">(Contact us)</a>
-  $NetBSD: files.html,v 1.29 2002/08/09 16:37:33 jschauma Exp $<br>
-  <a href="../../../Misc/disclaimer.html">Copyright &copy;
-    1998, 1999, 2000
+  <a href="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/feedback.cgi">(Contact us)</a>
+  $NetBSD: files.html,v 1.37 2004/10/30 22:33:31 jschauma Exp $<br>
+  <a href="../../../Misc/disclaimer.html">Copyright &copy; 1998-2004
     The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.  ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.</a>
   </small>
 </address>