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support/send-pr.xml: 1.3 -> 1.4



以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。

support/send-pr.xml: 1.3 -> 1.4
> revision 1.4
> date: 2007/06/19 08:09:08;  author: tron;  state: Exp;  lines: +34 -17
> Apply patch provided by Mark Weinem:
> 
> Put:
>    * Query PR
>    * Send PR
>    * GNATS summary
> good visible at the top of support/send-pr.html

金曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。

以下、訳と原文それぞれの新旧の差分です。

--- support/send-pr.xml.orig	2007-07-19 07:26:12.000000000 +0900
+++ support/send-pr.xml	2007-07-19 07:26:12.000000000 +0900
@@ -5,19 +5,35 @@
 
 <webpage id="ja-support-send-pr">
 <config param="desc" value="NetBSD 問題報告"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: send-pr.xml,v 1.3 2007/06/10 18:05:12 kano Exp $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: send-pr.xml,v 1.4 2007/06/19 08:09:08 tron Exp $"/>
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: send-pr.xml,v 1.3 2007/06/10 18:05:12 kano Exp   -->
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2007/06/10 18:05:12 $"/>
+<!-- NetBSD: send-pr.xml,v 1.4 2007/06/19 08:09:08 tron Exp   -->
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2007/06/19 08:09:08 $"/>
 <head>
 <title>NetBSD 問題報告</title>
 </head>
 
 
 <html:hr/>
-<ulink url="../Gnats/">[GNATS&nbsp;summary]</ulink>
-<ulink url="query-pr.html">[Query&nbsp;PR]</ulink>
+<itemizedlist>
 
+<listitem><para>
+    <emphasis role="bold"><ulink url="query-pr.html">PR 照会
+    </ulink></emphasis>
+</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>
+    <emphasis role="bold">
+    <ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
+    PR 送信</ulink></emphasis>
+</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>
+    <emphasis role="bold">
+    <ulink url="../Gnats/">GNATS 要約</ulink></emphasis>
+</para></listitem>
+
+</itemizedlist>
 <html:hr/>
 
 <sect1 id="web-submitting">
@@ -25,17 +41,16 @@
   <para>
     以下の二つの段階を踏んでおこなってください。
     <orderedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          <ulink url="query-pr.html">その問題がまだ報告されていないことを確認する</ulink>
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          <ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
-            新規の問題報告を提出する</ulink>
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+      <ulink url="query-pr.html">PR 照会フォーム</ulink>を使って、
+      その問題がまだ報告されていないことを確認する
+      </para></listitem>
+
+    <listitem><para>
+    <ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
+    PR 送信フォーム</ulink>を使って、
+    新規の問題報告を提出する
+    </para></listitem>
     </orderedlist>
   </para>
   
@@ -526,9 +541,11 @@
 </sect4>
 
 <html:hr/>
-<ulink url="#page-top">[Page&nbsp;top]</ulink>
-<ulink url="../Gnats/">[GNATS&nbsp;summary]</ulink>
-<ulink url="query-pr.html">[Query&nbsp;PR]</ulink>
+<ulink url="#page-top">[ページの一番上へ]</ulink>
+<ulink url="query-pr.html">[PR 照会]</ulink>
+<ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
+[PR 送信]</ulink>
+<ulink url="../Gnats/">[GNATS 要約]</ulink>
 
 </sect3>
 
Index: support/send-pr.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/htdocs/support/send-pr.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- support/send-pr.xml	10 Jun 2007 18:05:12 -0000	1.3
+++ support/send-pr.xml	19 Jun 2007 08:09:08 -0000	1.4
@@ -5,35 +5,50 @@
 
 <webpage id="support-send-pr">
 <config param="desc" value="NetBSD Problem Reports"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: send-pr.xml,v 1.3 2007/06/10 18:05:12 kano Exp $"/>
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2007/06/10 18:05:12 $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: send-pr.xml,v 1.4 2007/06/19 08:09:08 tron Exp $"/>
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2007/06/19 08:09:08 $"/>
 <head>
 <title>NetBSD Problem Reports</title>
 </head>
 
 
 <html:hr/>
-<ulink url="../Gnats/">[GNATS&nbsp;summary]</ulink>
-<ulink url="query-pr.html">[Query&nbsp;PR]</ulink>
+<itemizedlist>
 
+<listitem><para>
+    <emphasis role="bold"><ulink url="query-pr.html">Query&nbsp;PR
+    </ulink></emphasis>
+</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>
+    <emphasis role="bold">
+    <ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
+    Send&nbsp;PR</ulink></emphasis>
+</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>
+    <emphasis role="bold">
+    <ulink url="../Gnats/">GNATS&nbsp;summary</ulink></emphasis>
+</para></listitem>
+
+</itemizedlist>
 <html:hr/>
 
 <sect1 id="web-submitting">
-  <title>Submitting a Bug or Problem Report via the Web</title>
+  <title>Submitting a bug or problem report via the Web</title>
   <para>
     This is a two-step process:
     <orderedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          <ulink url="query-pr.html">Checking that the problem is not already reported</ulink>
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          <ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
-            Submitting the new problem report</ulink>
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+      Checking the problem is not already reported, using the
+      <ulink url="query-pr.html">Query&nbsp;PR form</ulink>
+      </para></listitem>
+
+    <listitem><para>
+    Submitting  a new problem report, using the 
+    <ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
+    Send&nbsp;PR form</ulink>
+    </para></listitem>
     </orderedlist>
   </para>
   
@@ -532,8 +547,10 @@
 
 <html:hr/>
 <ulink url="#page-top">[Page&nbsp;top]</ulink>
-<ulink url="../Gnats/">[GNATS&nbsp;summary]</ulink>
 <ulink url="query-pr.html">[Query&nbsp;PR]</ulink>
+<ulink url="http://www.NetBSD.org/cgi-bin/sendpr.cgi?gndb=netbsd">
+[Send&nbsp;PR]</ulink>
+<ulink url="../Gnats/">[GNATS&nbsp;summary]</ulink>
 
 </sect3>